Thanks so much for sharing, you write very well!
| Title: Three: The Chastisement
| 07 Aug 2014 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Nice to see Harry showing some respect, :D
Poor, silly Harry. I can remember wincing so many times at bad decisions he made in the books, lol. Nice chapter!
Cliffhanger much! *teasing* :D Awesome start!
| Title: Five: The Comfort
| 04 Aug 2014 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You need to make a series surrounding this. It's so sweet.
Beautiful! I loved it, I loved it!!!! Wonderful story and beautiful story. So sweet. So touching! Feel free to keep writing one-shots in the same universe whenever you want to, just for fun. :) This is a great way to turn the relationship realistically and in character! Fabulous! I loved the line at the end, where Snape threatened to watch Harry, and Harry asked, "You promise?" Loved it!!
| Title: Four: The Complaints
| 20 Jul 2014 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, so sweet. I'm so glad that Snape believed him, and can actually try to comfort and console him. So sweet. I preferred this lighter sort of corporal punishment. It seemed better.
| Title: Three: The Chastisement
| 20 Jul 2014 1:23 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh wow, poor Harry. Of course he is more upset and hurt than Snape would think possible. I hope that Snape gives him a chance and believes it! Good job with both characters and Harry's train of thoughts and emotions. It was really in character and well done.
Muah ha ha! Poor Harry. Loved it.
| Title: Five: The Comfort
| 19 Jul 2014 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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