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Title: The Doctor. 26 Feb 2009 5:53 pm
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    IF they don't know the persons name, they put in John/Jane Doe.
Title: The Doctor. 08 Oct 2006 7:10 am
Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The mispellings and horrible grammar make reading agonizing. I could not bear to go on after the first few sentences.
Title: The Doctor. 16 Feb 2005 1:18 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting start. Curiouis as to what will happen next
Title: The Doctor. 15 Feb 2005 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Blessing of Earendil (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOH!!! I can't wait to read more of this! Am really looking forward to when they find out what happened to Harry!

    Author's Response: Thank you. Hope you will continue reading it.
Title: The Doctor. 14 Feb 2005 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I really like the premise for this story. It's so unusual to see a POV Muggle doctor and that makes it that much more interesting and refreshing. I'd like you to practice on this chapter making it seem more like the thoughts of a real doctor in the ER and the procedures and such. I know that you can do it and it would make the story that much better, pulling the readers into the action and really fleshing out the experience- making them fear for Harry's injuries while not really knowing what is going on. (I know that TV shows like ER does that all the time with the medical aspects.) I really like what you have done so far and I'm excited to see where you will take this. :) I hope that you will continue writing it!

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