Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2023 8:18 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Ever going to finish this?
Title: Chapter 1 22 Dec 2015 8:06 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank God Merlin and everything else holy that my mom can't do that to me.
Title: Chapter 1 16 Sep 2014 6:11 pm
Reviewer: Roselina4389 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sweet start! I loved everyone's mild reaction if Snape was dead or not. Haha. It was really nicely written. Keep going. You could use a beta if you think your sentence structure isn't going well. But for a start, this is really good. Don't get discouraged and keep going. However I'm not sure McGonagall would call Malfoy 'Draco'.
Title: Chapter 1 15 Sep 2014 8:35 pm
Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) [Report This]
    hm, I was just thinking about the issue some other reviewers have brought up about the lines, or really the whole page, being overly long in the horizontal direction. Personally, I generally type my stories up on Google Drive and then copy-paste. I don't remember if there is an option for straight uploading, but did you try just copy-pasting? Or perhaps putting your story into a processor with less formatting than Word, such as TextEdit or WordPad/NotePad? I've never tried these, so they might have their own issues, I'm just thinking there may be some formatting thing that got left in and messed with the html script when it got copied over.

    Author's Response: Okay, thanks for the advice!
Title: Chapter 1 15 Sep 2014 4:51 am
Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I'm so glad to see someone answering my challenge! I thought it would be such a funny idea. Woo can't wait for more! (Also, if you go to the challenge page and click 'respond to the challenge' you can make this story appear under the challenge, just a tip.) Awesome opener, I hope we get more soon!

    Author's Response: Yeah, I absouletly LOVED that challenge xD Thanks for the advice!
Title: Chapter 1 14 Sep 2014 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    You need to fix the format of your writing pad. It's disconcerting having to scroll left to right to read an entire sentence. Out of curiosity, was this written on Notepad? Kudos for a good start, and no noticeable problems outside of the one I've already stated.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, thank you. But, as stated, I'm new to this site. How would I fix it?

    I used word. 

Title: Chapter 1 14 Sep 2014 7:42 am
Reviewer: melrose666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting story line, however some of the sentences went a little long making it a bit difficult to read.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Sep 2014 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice! Can't wait for more :D
Title: Chapter 1 13 Sep 2014 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice beginning. Looking forward to reading more. You might want to check your last paragraph, though...bit of garbled text tacked on at the end.

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