Title: My Enemy's Enemies
| 25 Dec 2014 11:56 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very good twist to the plot thank you
Oooh no! Glad moody is dead but surely dear old Minerva won't be found out to have killed him?! O.O
This is a great story! I love that both Draco and Severus are in it. They are two of my favourite characters. Your characterization of Snape is amazing. He is stern yet overly protective. The perfect combination.
The all powerful Albus Dumbledore is the bad guy. Whatever will poor Severus and Minerva do? I'm intrigued and very interested to know where this story is going. The last sentence you chose to end this chapter is perfect. Thanks for a great read!
Ooh, I like that Alastor is dead, and that it was Minerva who did it. Now, I kind of want them all to go on the run and hideaway somewhere, though I am sure that wherever you choose to take this story will be great. I really enjoyed this description: "His eyes held dozens of questions." Keep up the writing.
Ooh, I like that Alastor is dead, and that it was Minerva who did it. Now, I kind of want them all to go on the run and hideaway somewhere, though I am sure that wherever you choose to take this story will be great. I really enjoyed this description: "His eyes held dozens of questions." Keep up the writing.
I really like this, and, being a teacher, can totally relate: "'This was not part of my job description. Can you imagine the want ad? 'Hogwarts Potions Master needed. Must be able to bilocate and keep up with all the escapades of the Malfoy heir and the Boy-Who-Lived, while grading papers, preparing lessons, and enforcing discipline in the entire school.''" I think that, in a way, all teachers have Potters and Malfoys of their own to contend with, and the ability to bilocate would be extremely handy.
Title: My Enemy's Enemies
| 20 Dec 2014 7:27 pm
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Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
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Omg! McGonagal killed Moody?
Oh no! How is Snape going to protect Harry no. Oh, please update soon! You left us with another cliffie!
Title: A Broken Mirror
| 04 Dec 2014 10:44 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry you really put him through it! Great chapter thank you
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