Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Revelations 23 Dec 2014 12:57 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A very well written chapter. It would be good to hear Severus'point of view. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Thanks  for reading!  There will be more of Snape's POV in the next chapter :)
Title: Revelations 22 Dec 2014 3:10 pm
Reviewer: slytherinhrw (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I love this story. Something about Snape being fatherly to Harry makes me warm inside lol

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It does the same for me :)
Title: Revelations 18 Dec 2014 4:03 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story so much. I'm looking forward to reading about Harry living with snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you for following it! I look forward to that too. 
Title: The Train 15 Dec 2014 12:22 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Good grief, but Harry's a mess.
    You've got me hooked.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! More chapters will be coming out now that I'm on break from school. :)
Title: Wandering 15 Dec 2014 12:16 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautifully poignant start.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Title: The Train 31 Oct 2014 4:30 am
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    This is SO great!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Title: The Train 29 Oct 2014 9:51 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Seems like things have come to a head with Harry playing chicken with the train. You built the story up nicely, so that this was not completely out of left field. I like that someone is there with him, after, and that you've made just who that is a little mysterious.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I was trying to make it realistic. Harry sees the train and gets excited, the child in him coming out as the wonder of something so massive and neat speeds toward him. Before he can think, his body is taking him toward it and his motives change as he realizes that it could all be over in a second. But he doesn't give up.

     

    Anyway, that was my thought process. Thanks for reading!

Title: Defence Against the Dark Arts 29 Oct 2014 9:41 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Severus is questioning what's going on, and that it's, in a way, causing him to question what he believes about Harry.

    I really enjoyed this line, to see that Severus caught the ambiguity of what Harry had said: "'Yes there are bludgers capable of literacy, or yes you have been subjected to the blood quill? Speak up,'Severus responded, growing impatient."

    Author's Response: Thanks! That was one of my favorite lines too :)
Title: Breakfast 29 Oct 2014 9:09 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I like that, along with Dumbledore and McGonagall, Snape seems to be concerned about Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Wandering 29 Oct 2014 9:06 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful description in this opening chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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