| Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas
| 17 Jan 2023 4:03 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The description of incantations was fascinating, and Harry’s performance was so much fun. I see what you mean about “one step forward, two steps back” between Harry and Snape.
| Title: Chapter 9 On the Ethics of Magic - Obliviating
| 17 Jan 2023 3:34 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter with thoughtful discussions!
| Title: Chapter 8 Housing distrust
| 16 Jan 2023 2:00 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The Sorting Hat is wise, indeed. It was fun to see the older students getting to unwind. It will be interesting to see how everyone integrates back into school life.
I'm not sure if someone has made note of this, but I greatly enjoy when a writer sneaks themself into their works. Henna Hatch, a decidedly unique metamorphmagus fits perfectly with the fluidity of your writing style. I look forward to the sequel! As well as noting any changes (all good I'm sure) that 6+ years of writing will have on it. Stellar work! I love all the elements you incorporated especially with ethics and the kangabbit. 10/10 will absolutely read again.
| Title: Chapter 7 Seven Avada Kedavras
| 07 Nov 2022 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter with much to celebrate, until the chapter end, which was sad and unexpected.
Author's Response: I'm pleased that you liked it, and yet aware of the disappointing end... Let me explain: with this story I really wanted to explore what it might be like, realistically, given that everything had happened just as in canon, if Snape's and Harry's relationship was to change into something including mutual respect and trust. And I just believe it would take quite some time, so this story will repeatedly advance by two steps forward and one backward...
| Title: Chapter 6 Back at Hogwarts
| 06 Nov 2022 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the retracing of steps, and hope this works!
| Title: Chapter 5 The heart of a human
| 06 Nov 2022 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is so interesting and compelling! I love seeing the humor Snape finds in the Dark Lord’s demise. The link between Harry and the evil that still haunts him is fascinating.
I really appreciated Snape wanting to learn all about Harry’s experiences before night settles in.
| Title: Chapter 3 The inaccuracy of Muggle vocabulary
| 12 Sep 2022 10:42 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Interesting! I wonder who or what is behind this.
Author's Response: So great that you started to read this story! I hope that you will prevail through the many chapters and maybe move on to the sequel. You have some dramatic developments in front of you the next chapters :-)
| Title: Chapter 2 The Last Resort
| 12 Sep 2022 10:34 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Enjoyable back story! I hope that Severus and Harry can move beyond their defensiveness towards each other.
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