| Title: Chapter 6 Back at Hogwarts
| 06 Nov 2022 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the retracing of steps, and hope this works!
| Title: Chapter 6 Back at Hogwarts
| 15 Jun 2015 1:51 pm
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| Reviewer: elianam (Signed)
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Its better and better.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am happy to have a new reader review my story :-)
| Title: Chapter 6 Back at Hogwarts
| 30 Nov 2014 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting chapter and discussion about when to kill someone. You got the moral viewpoint of the two spot on. Ver spooky part when Harry retraces his steps.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! The scene in the Deathly Hallows when Harry leaves Dumbledore's office and go to meet his death in the Forbidden Forest is so strong and suggestive and sad. Writing this piece of fanfic, I couldn't resist adding that scene when Harry retraces his steps - an homage to JKR really...
It was no surprise that neither Harry nor Snape wanted security on themselves. I hope that doesn't backfire on them. Now that Harry and Severus are ready to confront the demon, I am looking forward to what happens next.
Ooh exciting, cant wait to see how it all happens next chapter :)
| Title: Chapter 6 Back at Hogwarts
| 21 Nov 2014 9:12 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awesome. I can't wait for the drama to start. I wonder about the new characters and am interested in what they might bring to the story. Are any of them going to end up as a villain? Perhaps a love interest for Snape? I am enjoying your Snape and Harry, and the retelling of Harry's journey to his death the first time. I hope that the attack won't be stronger because of where they are, and from Harry weakening himself through the use of so much magic earlier. Can't wait for the update! Please update when you can!
Author's Response: Thank you! You have some interesting suggestions for the continuation of this story, that of course I cannot comment on now because I don't want to spoil the plot... I updated chapter 7 some time ago - I'd love to hear what you think about it? There is more to come, but my beta reader needs to catch up before I submit. Thank you again for interesting comments!
This is so well written, it feels like jk wrote it herself!! Wonderful annd interesting, thank you for writing this!
Author's Response: Thank you, that was quite an overwhelming compliment, I didn't know how to respond at first. JKR has inspired so many of us - just look at the stories at this site! She's just terrific, isn't she?
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