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Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 17 Jan 2023 4:03 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The description of incantations was fascinating, and Harry’s performance was so much fun. I see what you mean about “one step forward, two steps back” between Harry and Snape.
Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 01 Jun 2015 2:55 am
Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving your storyline - wonderfully well written and engaging! Keep it up!

    I was thrown out of the story, however, in this chapter when you wrote that Sir Nicholas knocked/opened the door - as a ghost, I would have thought he just would have glided through the door...

    Author's Response:

    Haha, yes, that was a blatant mistake from my side, with Sir Nicholas. I guess I pictured him very polite, feeling important for having been invited to assist, trying to act as ”normal” as possible, but… no! How could he even open a door? I’m changing that - thank you!

Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 25 Apr 2015 10:06 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Awesome chapter! The memories, and the climatic ending between Snape and Harry was just delectable. So much drama! It makes sense why Harry is so good at these new types of spells, based on inheriting his ability from his mom, and practicing them of a sort as a baby. Wow. Fantastic imagination with that scene! Great descriptions! I love this story!
Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 10 Mar 2015 2:12 am
Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really enjoyed this. Don't know if you're still working on it, but lots of intriguing elements. Harry's smarts are very in character, and I like as well how you've drawn out both Snape's inability to express himself exactly as he means to in the same plot as teaching Harry to 'develop' his communication. It's a subtle way of getting at the relationship between Harry and Snape, but also the larger problem in the HP universe with secrets... thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate your perception of Harry's character as well as Snape's and his relationship. I try to maintain the complexity of the canon characters and explore, rather than radically alter or simplify the personalities of the story. I intend to update once a week from now on (the story is finished, so I only need to go over and proof-read each chapter before publishing). /Henna  
Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 04 Mar 2015 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting thank you
Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 01 Mar 2015 11:48 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    And things were going so well...

    Author's Response: Alas... 
Title: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 01 Mar 2015 10:30 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG....what the hell is Snape's problem? I just don't understand "why" he's doing this. He must sincerely hate them, or have utter contempt for them.

    Talk about blaming the victim at that last part: "it's your fault I invaded your mind, even if I made sure you have no skill in the Mind Arts whatsoever ;-) At least Harry can avoid him for 2 months: give himself some much needed space from the jerk and time to figure out how to not let these sorts of people score a hit emotionally. It's a skill we all have to learn eventually.

    Gah! I love Snape even when I hate him.

    Kudos on creating a background for incantations. Making up Magical Theory from scratch can't be easy. I sincerely commend your imagination.

    Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: I'm sorry Snape is so exasperating - but Snape is Snape, right? It will take a lot of time for him to change, if ever... Thanks for your encouragement on making up Magical Theory - I enjoy it :-) 

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