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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
I was thrown out of the story, however, in this chapter when you wrote that Sir Nicholas knocked/opened the door - as a ghost, I would have thought he just would have glided through the door... Author's Response: Haha, yes, that was a blatant mistake from my side, with Sir Nicholas. I guess I pictured him very polite, feeling important for having been invited to assist, trying to act as ”normal” as possible, but… no! How could he even open a door? I’m changing that - thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate your perception of Harry's character as well as Snape's and his relationship. I try to maintain the complexity of the canon characters and explore, rather than radically alter or simplify the personalities of the story. I intend to update once a week from now on (the story is finished, so I only need to go over and proof-read each chapter before publishing). /Henna
Author's Response: Alas...
Talk about blaming the victim at that last part: "it's your fault I invaded your mind, even if I made sure you have no skill in the Mind Arts whatsoever ;-) At least Harry can avoid him for 2 months: give himself some much needed space from the jerk and time to figure out how to not let these sorts of people score a hit emotionally. It's a skill we all have to learn eventually. Gah! I love Snape even when I hate him. Kudos on creating a background for incantations. Making up Magical Theory from scratch can't be easy. I sincerely commend your imagination. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I'm sorry Snape is so exasperating - but Snape is Snape, right? It will take a lot of time for him to change, if ever... Thanks for your encouragement on making up Magical Theory - I enjoy it :-) |
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