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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 30 Oct 2015 12:24 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the drama in this and all subsequent chapters!

    Author's Response: Great! I'm glad that you do and happy for your reviews :-) It's lovely to have a new reader discover the story!
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 29 Apr 2015 6:06 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Argh surely there's a reason for Snape doing that with his acromantula paper?! Things have been going sooo well for them lol :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! You've probably read chapter 18 by now and seen the explanation that Mr Weasley provided about the publication. There will, however, be a scene between S and H where the acromantula paper is discussed as well, a few chapters ahead, if you have the patience to wait, because S is not very approachable at the moment... 
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 25 Apr 2015 9:49 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. So what is all that about? Did Snape publish the paper under his name deliberately? How come? I hope Harry gets to find out what;s really going on. i loved the descriptions of the Knight's double move and all that. Better than Quidditch? Wow. Thanks so much for the update!
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 23 Apr 2015 12:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a surprise. It doesn't seem like something Snape would do. He is already a potion's master and headmaster of Hogwarts so he doesn't need the notoriety. Looking forward to finding out what is going on.

    Author's Response: There's a bit of an explanation coming up in the next chapter. To hear Snape's point of view, you need to wait a little longer, though...
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 22 Apr 2015 10:30 pm
Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow, that was unexpected with the article! Great cliffhanger.

    I love all the magical theory in this. It's so fascinating and well-developed.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 22 Apr 2015 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantatstic!!! Looking forward to much more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! And there will be much more :-)
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 22 Apr 2015 6:41 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm honestly not surprised in the least with the Snape you have built in this story. He would have no qualms about stealing someone else's work IMHO. Kinda throws into doubt all his other so-called accomplishments doesn't it?

    In fact, while reading the beginning part of this chapter, I was wondering why snape was acting so out of character by helping Harry :-)

    Great twist though.

    Can harry finally give up on him now? *dangerously close to whining* I think enough is enough. Harry is verging into doormat territory if he just accepts this and still defends Snape.

    Author's Response: *Whining back* You are so suspicious of Snape! You're supposed to be shocked, not to expect such behaviour from him! :-) Okay, I acknowledge that he is a difficult and ambivalent character, but wasn't that scene with Harry and Snape doing the Double Knight's Move just lovely? I agree with your analysis though that Harry is just a little too pliant and forgiving. But it's approaching saintly territory, not doormat! 

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