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Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 19 Jun 2015 11:32 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for your fast updating as you can see I can't keep up with you!
Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 06 Jun 2015 6:06 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! Cliffie!

    Should I be suspicious of Ginny? Or am I descending to Mad Eye levels of paranoia? I guess I'm always a bit suspicious of her character in whatever story I read. Too much fanfiction :-)

    I'm becoming more solidified in my guess as to Harry's future career.

    I also enjoyed reading Ron's explanation about doing something because you want to and not because someone else wants you to. I think this is something Harry desperately needs to internalize and emulate. I want to think Ron expounded upon his reasoning for Harry's benefit and not the benefit of the discussion they were having. Sort of a subtle nudge to Harry. That Ron see's how Harry was guided in most of his decisions in the past. But, that is probably my own speculation and imagination at work.

    Anyhoo, love the updates as always and can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Mad Eye Moody, is that you :-)? That would explain your extreme reticence to grant Snape a ghost of chance ever since the beginning of this story... But to extend your suspicions to Ginny... Hmm... seriously, you're right in-so-much that Ginny is not that uncomplicated sweet girl character that one might be misled to believe - but would she really do anything deliberately to hurt Harry? I guess you'll have to wait and see :-)
Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 06 Jun 2015 8:36 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving this at the moment, cant wait to see where they are off to :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm actually pretty excited about the coming chapters as well :-) I will be updating in a few days from now.
Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 05 Jun 2015 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely loved reading the parts in the newspaper from James' relative and Tobias Snape - markedly developed characterizations for how shortly they were mentioned. Well done! I am intrigued by all the potions being experimented on. I wonder if they will let Harry use them on Snape? Will Snape allow it? Does he even have a choice? I do know that he does not want his private life out there for everyone to know about. He is very private. Fantastic chapter. I am absolutely loving this story! Thanks so much for all the updates and the developed plot! The original parts about magic and the characters are great. I can't wait to read more about Snape! Please update when you can!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Tobias Snape should be an important character when you try to approach and explain the enigma Severus Snape... I'm sorry I can't have more of him in this story... There will be more about the Veritaserum they are experimenting on, however :-)
Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 04 Jun 2015 8:33 pm
Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter, too. I'm glad that there are finally some good news for Harry and Snape in the newspaper...

    Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it was about time :-)
Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 04 Jun 2015 4:45 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great update! Poor Snape, having his background fodder for the press. Glad he has strong allies. Evil cliffhanger ...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reviewing. Yes, that was an embarrassing exposure of Snape’s privacy in the press. But at least it put an end to the speculations about his parentage to Voldemort. We’re into a new build-up phase of the story and soon there will be some more drama!


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