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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 37 The Veritaserum of Exceptions 20 Sep 2015 8:26 am
Reviewer: RLara (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. So many intentions and articles and experiments in one chapter. Poor Hermione and specially poor Harry. They must be so exhausted!

    Good to see you follow through with Ginny's complications from the 'treatment'. It feels weird to agree so much with Harry hahah. People placate him so much. Even himself.

    I actually wish he'd really explode sometimes. A few in his life actually deserve it and he shouldn't be so 'adult' all the time.

    I really like your writing and pacing. You're able to make the characters interact a lot while keeping their intentions and changes in their relationships smooth and believable.

    I'm excited for the trial. This chapter was great. And there are so many plot points coming together. I'm curious too XD (And I can't help but hope Snape will get to insult a lot of people and still walk away unharmed hahah).

    Author's Response:

    There is another reviewer who like you is very frustrated with me because of Harry’s ’door-mat’ tendencies as she/ he calls it. I guess that trait of Harry’s is my interpretation of what growing up with the Dursleys has done to him. Even if they were not physically abusive in cannon, the neglect and lack of love from your family will make it hard, I believe, to assert yourself. You know right from wrong in theory, but you’re so used to stand back that you no longer notice doing so. This issue was addressed to some extent in chapter 26 (To trust a Slytherin). Harry is not cowed or anything, he simply has learnt to choose his moments of protest very carefully. Moreover, fighting a dark lord all of your life and really going through with it, must leave its traces. Like Hermione said to Snape at St Mungo’s: Nothing’s very important to him in comparison to what he has lived.

     

    Thanks for the reveiws and, here you are: the inquiry! 

Title: Chapter 37 The Veritaserum of Exceptions 19 Sep 2015 3:08 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape seems uninteresting in defending himself so I will be looking forward to his inquiry. At least Harry and Hermione are working in his behalf.

    Author's Response: Well, I'm updating with the Inquiry-chapter right now, so please read :-)

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