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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 17 Nov 2015 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very dramatic and well done thank you. I loved their tiff in the forest and how it ended great chapter!

    Author's Response: :-D
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 14 Nov 2015 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome! Again Poor Harry, I guess Snape really isn't thinking all that rational right now... I Liked how well they fightend together:) :( really, this Journey is nearly finished?! I don' t want to See an end to this! Since someone is guessing your native language, I hopp in and say its German (and you learned french at School), right:)?

    Author's Response:

    Good guess, you were close - my native laguage is one of the Scandinavian laguages (which is a north germanic language) and I lived in France during part of my adolescence.

    It is really hard for me, too, to say good-bye so soon to the story and to the readers, but Harry's school year has come to an end and there's where it usually ends, right?

Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 14 Nov 2015 12:38 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very exciting story, really. I have been trying to guess at which is your native language... Is it French? I thought at first Spanish because of some of your directly-translated words and structures, but I am convinced it's not Spanish... Especially with as many French words that popped up here and there throughout...

    Author's Response: Thank you for appreciating the story! I lived in France for several years during my adolescence, so my French would be better than my English (but as I don't live there any longer it has a tendency to fade away). Both languages are still foreign languages for me, however. I believe I have a tendency to choose words that I recognise from French when I write in English, wherein lies a danger as there is often a slight change of meaning and I risk to get it wrong... My native language is one of the Scandinavian languages - guess that's hard to guess :-)
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 12 Nov 2015 5:25 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'VE BEEN CRYING FOR LIKE 10 MINUTES OH MY gOD.

    This was amazingly well written. I knew Snape would go after Harry when he fell, but to imagine them fighting alongside together... and that finale! UGH! So good! So in character too-- while I craved it, I couldn't see Snape pouring out his heart like that.

    Author's Response: Oh, I like these kind of emotional responses - it feels like I have accomplished something... The scene between Snape and Harry in the end is one of my own favourite scenes in this story - so happy that you approved of it!
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 12 Nov 2015 2:40 pm
Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter!

    Author's Response: Great! Thank you for letting me know :-)
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 12 Nov 2015 1:41 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved how they descended the cliff. Glad they finally began to speak again.

    Author's Response: Yes, it was, all in all, a rather good outcome of the whole adventure, wasn't it?

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