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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 12:03 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! I'm sorry to see it end. I loved how you integrated canon with new concepts. Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you for regular reviewing - it has been very encouraging to read them!
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 8:53 am
Reviewer: Kesstrel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story. The way you developed the Snape and Harry dynamic was refreshing and interesting. If you write a sequel or even more fic in general I definitely will be reading along :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that!
Title: Chapter 46 An embellished tale 22 Nov 2015 7:25 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Haha such a fantastic chapter!!

    Author's Response: :-D
Title: Chapter 46 An embellished tale 21 Nov 2015 2:36 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good summation!

    Author's Response: Thanks! The last chapter is a kind of summation between Snape and Harry as well. Please enjoy.
Title: Chapter 46 An embellished tale 20 Nov 2015 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Harry's speech! Very good chapter, I hope you write a sequel of course but I'm grateful you are concluding this one! It has been a mighty effort!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Mighty effort indeed... I'm relieved and a bit sad to be done at the same time. Please enjoy the last chapter.
Title: Chapter 46 An embellished tale 18 Nov 2015 8:22 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry to see the story end coming. I had hoped to find out who the mysterious Mr. Hatch was. The story has been a real pleasure to read. I especially liked the off and on friendship between Snape and Harry. It was good to see Severus get some credit for what he has done, too. I look forward to your future stories.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot :-) Snape is actually opening up a little in the last chapter, but I have enjoyed writing the "on and off" friendship as you put it. Their relationship is so charged with events from the past that it is difficult for them to find an equilibrium.
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 17 Nov 2015 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very dramatic and well done thank you. I loved their tiff in the forest and how it ended great chapter!

    Author's Response: :-D
Title: Chapter 44 Brothers, fathers and sons 17 Nov 2015 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you are very good at action writing! It was very realistic and well done thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I still think writing action is difficult, but I'm glad someone enjoyed it :-)
Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 14 Nov 2015 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome! Again Poor Harry, I guess Snape really isn't thinking all that rational right now... I Liked how well they fightend together:) :( really, this Journey is nearly finished?! I don' t want to See an end to this! Since someone is guessing your native language, I hopp in and say its German (and you learned french at School), right:)?

    Author's Response:

    Good guess, you were close - my native laguage is one of the Scandinavian laguages (which is a north germanic language) and I lived in France during part of my adolescence.

    It is really hard for me, too, to say good-bye so soon to the story and to the readers, but Harry's school year has come to an end and there's where it usually ends, right?

Title: Chapter 45 Levicorpus 14 Nov 2015 12:38 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very exciting story, really. I have been trying to guess at which is your native language... Is it French? I thought at first Spanish because of some of your directly-translated words and structures, but I am convinced it's not Spanish... Especially with as many French words that popped up here and there throughout...

    Author's Response: Thank you for appreciating the story! I lived in France for several years during my adolescence, so my French would be better than my English (but as I don't live there any longer it has a tendency to fade away). Both languages are still foreign languages for me, however. I believe I have a tendency to choose words that I recognise from French when I write in English, wherein lies a danger as there is often a slight change of meaning and I risk to get it wrong... My native language is one of the Scandinavian languages - guess that's hard to guess :-)

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