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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 30 A holiday goes awry 05 Nov 2015 5:41 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I quite enjoyed your haunting vignette with the man in the cemetery
Title: Chapter 29 An ordinary vacation trip 05 Nov 2015 5:27 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh god I love this story, it's so creative and full of life!
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 03 Nov 2015 5:55 am
Reviewer: aurtrina (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh! Good story. Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Next chapter's up now :-)
Title: Chapter 39 Luna less loony 31 Oct 2015 7:08 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story you have here!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 30 Oct 2015 12:24 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the drama in this and all subsequent chapters!

    Author's Response: Great! I'm glad that you do and happy for your reviews :-) It's lovely to have a new reader discover the story!
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 11:55 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I didn't see that coming. Very exciting chapter. I'll be looking forward to finding out what happens next.

    Author's Response: Snape's past is cathing up with him once again... Thanks for the review, more to come soon!
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Rather convenient timing for Dumbles to be waking up again, indeed. *grumbles about twinkly-eyed interfering fools*

    I'm not sure how I feel about this one, tbh. I just don't really buy it, I suppose. Like, maybe I'm just in denial or something, but I feel like if I use a fingernail to scratch at the veneer, as it were, something else will reveal itself...

    A good update, in any case, even if current situation has me disgruntled with just about everyone involved.

    Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review even in the middle of disgruntledness :-) Action is a rather difficult genre to write, I think - or it simply does not agree with me, specifically. I needed something drastic to happen in the story, though - a crisis to bring Harry and Snape closer together. It doesn't look like that right now, but bear with it another chapter or two and I hope it will make more sense.
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a strange turn of events!

    Author's Response: Strange, yes I know - I needed a little action to animate the story. It easily gets a bit weird though - the action genre is not as straight forward as you'd like to think...
Title: Chapter 7 Seven Avada Kedavras 29 Oct 2015 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was magnificent
Title: Chapter 1 Postwar at the Burrow 29 Oct 2015 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to say this is the first time I've read a beginning like this, and I was completely drawn in by your writing style and originality

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