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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 1 Postwar at the Burrow 29 Oct 2015 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to say this is the first time I've read a beginning like this, and I was completely drawn in by your writing style and originality
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 10:51 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great cliffhanger - literally ... Interesting turn of events. Harry and Severus are in a terrible position. Looking forward to reading about how they get out of it.

    Author's Response: Yes, they are truly at a suffocatingly high altitude at the moment being - as they will become all too aware of in the next chapter...
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 9:33 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    No! Not the cloak! I'm hopelessly addicted to this by the way; a really well written fic. I especially appreciate the studious side of Harry; in the book he had seemed like this mediocre student who gets by on talent and luck without significant effort. Lovely!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review and thank you for enjoying the story! As you can see, the setting in this story is mostly cannon, so when I started to fantasise how a reconciliation between Snape and Harry would realistically take place, I thought that making Harry more studious was an important requisite, because that was in my mind a way for Snape and Harry to find common ground and a way for Snape to - finally - start respecting Harry. I also thought that it would make sense that getting rid of Voldemort’s horcrux would affect Harry in some way - not his true personality, no, but in this case his ability to concentrate. Then I also think that in real life people often change a lot in their late teens - the childhood tastes and choices mature and an irresponsible youth might suddenly become studious… Thanks for appreciating :-)

Title: Chapter 42 The Mirror of Faith 26 Oct 2015 9:34 am
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am glad, Harry came to his defence! Looping forward to more!

    Author's Response: Of course he did ;-) Here's the new chapter.
Title: Chapter 42 The Mirror of Faith 23 Oct 2015 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: :-) A new one is up.
Title: Chapter 42 The Mirror of Faith 23 Oct 2015 5:00 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    The trial at last - and finally, Snape is acquitted. I wonder what else is behind his response to Harry vouching for him. Yes, I'd have expected him to be surprised, even a bit angry that the kid went against his wishes, but it seems there must be more to it than that. I look forward to seeing what that turns out to be.

    Author's Response:

    You're right, of course - some explanation is found in the new chapter. 

    Looking forward to reading your contribution for the Halloween fic fest, by the way :-D Good luck! 

Title: Chapter 42 The Mirror of Faith 21 Oct 2015 11:34 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the Mirror of Faith. You really come up with some neat ideas. I can't imagine that Harry wouldn't testify in Snape's defense. Severus' reaction after the trial seemed odd though. Looking forward to finding out what was in his head.

    Author's Response: Yes, there seems to be a lot on Snape's mind. I hope it will get clearer during the next few chapters.
Title: Chapter 42 The Mirror of Faith 21 Oct 2015 5:06 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape shouldn't be so upset at Steadfast, especially after she explained her role.

    Author's Response: No, clearly Snape is stuck and preoccupied by other things and take it out on Mrs Steadfast. But then he's not one to spare people when he is upset, is he - whehter they are at fault or not?
Title: Chapter 42 The Mirror of Faith 21 Oct 2015 3:17 pm
Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal 18 Oct 2015 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Again an amazing chapter! Is it mean from me, that I am glad you are showing us Harrys and ginnys relationship problems;)?!

    Author's Response: No, not at all, it's not bad of you to be interested in relationship issues - I'm glad that you are. It's a bit tricky to write about, but I think it says something about Ginny's character and above all it tells us what war and traumas can do to people and relationships. 

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