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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal 16 Oct 2015 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! A sense of irony over the offer of Grimmauld Place Sirus' old home being used by Severus as a hiding place!

    Author's Response: I agree... about the irony :-)
Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal 16 Oct 2015 3:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Lots happening in this chapter. I liked that Harry offered Snape a refuge if he was found guilty and had to escape. Ginny sounds like she is really messed up. I wondered if ignoring or forgetting all her problems would work out. I hope Severus gets some kind of support for his trial. Looking forward to finding out.

    Author's Response: Please find out in chapter 42 :-)
Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal 15 Oct 2015 10:11 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Great update! I really like Harry's way of revising - very unique, and probably more effective for many, I would think.

    Ah, but Snape ought to be more optimistic. What am I saying. This is Snape, after all. Things will somehow come round right, though. They have to. At least, I hope they have to in the end!

    Well writ.

    Author's Response: You were right, of course! Things did come round (read chapter 42), or someone came round, although Snape seems to find it hard to accept...
Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal 15 Oct 2015 2:41 pm
Reviewer: BlueWatr5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved how Harry talked to Snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you. Snape is clearly disturbed by Harry's wish to help him, though, even more so in the next chapter...
Title: Chapter 40 The Ball 11 Oct 2015 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews - it was nice to hear from you again!
Title: Chapter 39 Luna less loony 11 Oct 2015 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting chapter
Title: Chapter 38 The Inquiry 11 Oct 2015 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good court scene thank you
Title: Chapter 33 Angst, Oblivion and Regrets 10 Oct 2015 4:18 am
Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have been reading your story for 2 days, and am really enjoying it, but I do have to say, I just really don't like Ginny much. She's not my favorite character in cannon either, but she's just really selfesh and kind of hateful.

    Author's Response: Hmm... I know that several readers are not happy with this Ginny, and I neither can nor do I want to defend her, but I think that she is more immature than hateful. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story :-)
Title: Chapter 40 The Ball 08 Oct 2015 1:02 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ack, not good! The good Healer's testimony is rather important. Granted, were it not, he wouldn't have been abducted. I hope he'll be all right. :(

    Another good update. I look forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you. The story is going to turn a bit more adventurous towards the end. I'm trying to build up the suspense with Healer Frankiss abduction...
Title: Chapter 40 The Ball 07 Oct 2015 6:29 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the introduction of murderous owls and black letters as well as the young people's ball.

    Author's Response: Great! More to come...

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