Wow! Lily did a great job. Severus is all on his own now with no advice from Lily. I can't wait to see what his first step is towards Harry. Please update again soon!
I've read other Christmas Carol based stories with Snape before but I think this one is my favorite. Having Lily take him on the whole journey would be the most effective way to get through to Severus and you did a nice job showing the two of them. I'm glad he was able to get some closure before she left.
| Title: Imminent Tragedy
| 10 Dec 2014 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Imminent Tragedy
| 07 Dec 2014 8:47 am
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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This is really, really good. I almost passed over it because I'm not one for holiday stories, but I'm so glad I gave it a chance. Please update soon.
| Title: Imminent Tragedy
| 07 Dec 2014 2:33 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
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Will that be enough to change Severus' mind about Harry? I'm looking forward to finding out.
Wow!!!
Impresionante!!! Sencillamente impresionante!!!
Esto fue genial, lograste conmoverme
no solo eso,
la última frase, me dejo sin palabras, wow
Loving this :) I have a question - is this going to be a long story, or will it be ending soon?
Author's Response: Both, in a way--I only have a couple more chapters to go of this, but there will be a sequel, most likely a lot longer. Though I might not get that one started till after Christmas. Glad your enjoying :)
| Title: Painful Routine
| 05 Dec 2014 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the beginning scene please post the story if you can. Thank you a great chapter
Impresionante!!!
Pobre Harry, (el actual)
y bella escena de una navidad pasada alternativa
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