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Title: Painful Routine 01 Dec 2014 9:42 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the way you are comparing and contrasting Snape and harry's lives with such jarring scene changes really drives home the point Lily is trying to make.

    Harry coping with the pain of his connection to Voldy due (in part) to Snape's abuse is powerful and heart wrenching. There isn't a lot to be said really other than acknowledging that it didn't have to be this way and that is rests mostly with Snape's actions - and inaction's in this case.

    well done, can't wait for more!
Title: Painful Routine 29 Nov 2014 11:42 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying the way you are alternating between the realities. Showing Severus what Harry is currently going through should get his attention and make him come up with some alternate way of teaching Harry. With that kind of pain, Harry should be motivated to learn. The other reality should be interesting and I'm looking forward to more.
Title: Painful Routine 29 Nov 2014 2:14 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg I am absolutely loving thisss! Cannot wait for the next chapter! :)
Title: Taking Responsibility 26 Nov 2014 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very good but why not Spinners End?

    Author's Response:

    Good question, with several answers. For one thing, I find Spinner's End a pretty depressing place, not somewhere I'd want the next scene set. For another, I can imagine Severus having somewhere else that he prefers to live when Voldemort/the other Death Eaters aren't around, somewhere he wouldn't want them to know about. Mostly though, when I ignore the last one or two books, I tend to ignore the backstory revealed in them as well. It allows me more freedom as an author, and means I can surprise my readers more easily. This particular setting is very specific in my mind because I've been writing it in another fic--the one the reality is based on.

Title: Taking Responsibility 23 Nov 2014 11:27 am
Reviewer: ladychantel (Signed) [Report This]
    More please
Title: Taking Responsibility 23 Nov 2014 4:09 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    It'll be interesting to read what happens next.
Title: Taking Responsibility 23 Nov 2014 1:24 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!!!

    Que imagen tan desgarradora de Harry, impresionante!!!!

    Y sin duda es un gran detalle que vayas a aƱadir realidades alternas,

    wow!!!
Title: Taking Responsibility 23 Nov 2014 1:07 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The glimpse into a different timeline is an interesting twist. I'm looking forward to finding out what Lily has to show Severus.
Title: Broken Promises 18 Nov 2014 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good take on The Christmas Carol
Title: Prologue: Planning Ahead 18 Nov 2014 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely sad little opener

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