I wondered if Harry's name would come out of the goblet. At least Severus came to his senses and knows that Harry had nothing to do with it. Since Snape will be in the background keeping an eye on Harry, I'm looking forward to seeing how large a role Moody will have in your story. I thought the crush was a nice touch. At least she knows that nothing will come of it and it is just her fancy so she won't make a fool of herself.
Author's Response: I'm wondering about what to do with moody too, if i'm honest. but he is a large threat, because he hates snape for being one of the deth eaters who turned their back on his lord and if he learns about his and harrys relationship - shit just got real ;)
i really wnted to put the hermione crush in, because i think its realistic and as a little pun to all the harry/sev stories out. don't get me wrong: i love them, but they do have something slightly ridiculous about them...