Wonderful chapter. Thanks for the long read. I enjoyed the dialogue.
The game was so well done. It yielded insight, was funny, and left everyone happy (including me). Darn letter!
This was a deeply insightful chapter. The letters between Snape and Harry felt honest, and a step in the right direction for the development of a relationship. I truly hope that Snape receives, or finds, Harry’s letter. Thanks for the terrific chapter.
Intriguing chapter. It was helpful that Sprout tried to set them straight. I wondered if Harry would mention how the trio going after the stone gave Quirrell access that he wouldn’t have otherwise had.
This was an interesting chapter! Snape is all over the place in his dealings with Harry. The other occupant of the house gives me shivers, but I look forward to her and Harry meeting.
I love Sprout’s advice, and am heartened that Snape seems willing and open to change his dynamic with Harry.
That was an amazing, angsty chapter. Go Harry!
Great start to your story. Snape’s house was described so chillingly well.
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| 27 Jan 2016 8:15 pm
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Thank you a very interesting chapter
| Title: Confession
| 27 Jan 2016 7:58 pm
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Thank you a great chapter
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