| Title: A New Plan
| 02 Feb 2015 10:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter
| Title: Defense Lessons
| 02 Feb 2015 10:24 pm
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Very powerful and I like the Dumbledore bashing he deserves it
| Title: Harry's Arrival
| 02 Feb 2015 10:00 pm
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Not sure if I read any of this before the sight went down so I'll review in case not. Loved it but could you indicate when a scene changes as I thought it was Harry's nightmare for a while
Thanks
The letter writing may be a good way for the two of them to break the ice. Though if Snape reads about St. James Potter, he may go ballistic.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! Yesterday was my birthday and I woke up to find an email from P&S. I got a review and I discovered that P&S was working again!!! Double fantastic!!
Oh, I think you'll see plenty of ballistic Snape in the chapters to come.
I like that they are writing letters to one another. At least they are communicating!
an excellent chapter please update soon i really enjoy reading this story
writing a letter is a good way to tell someone how you really feel. you can say what you want without stuttering over your words.
LOVE IT!!! Great story and plot, plus, just a fact, you joined on my brithday! :D Don't stop!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading my story! I'm glad you like it and I definitely plan on continuing. I have the next few chapters all planned! It's a really cool coincidence that I joined this site on your birthday! I just read the summary of your story and it sounds really interesting and original. I'm reading it the next chance I get! Thanks again for the review!
I thought that Professor Sprout would be listening to their conversation. She hasn't been made a Head of House for being naïve or dumb. Too bad the kids wouldn't pay attention to her. All those other teachers clearly know Snape better and have reason to trust him.
Author's Response: People have a habit of underestimating Professor Sprout. She's really perceptive and good at understanding the true heart of a person. That is why she stood by Severus even when others abandoned him. The kids just can't trust the adults, especially Hermione who has to find the answers for herself. Still, I think the kids might just stumble into something the adults don't know of! Thanks for commenting!
wow!!!
sencillamente, wow!!!
no puedo creer lo impresionante de esta historia, es realmente genial,
me encanta, este Snape,
me he enamorado de tu historia
Author's Response: Grazie mille!
Non conosco lo spagnolo quindi rispondo in italiano. Le tue parole d'incoraggiamento sono fantastiche! Spero che leggerai il resto delle storia!
(Thanks a lot for your review!!!!!!!!)
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