Potions and Snitches
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Title: Getting Along 14 Dec 2014 10:50 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The snake was a surprise. No wonder Snape was so upset. Too bad that he is still taking it out on Harry. At least since Harry is training with Sprout, who is Snape's friend, she may help Harry understand him better. I'm sure that at some point, Severus and Harry will find out about their shared ability to talk to snakes. That should help create more of a bond between them. One comment - you mentioned 'easier to bare' at least once. It should be 'easier to bear.'

    Author's Response: Things are definitely going to improve between Snape and Harry in the next few chapters. He's going to try and patch things up with Harry. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. My spelling could use a little help sometimes. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Title: Getting Along 13 Dec 2014 7:10 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    i wonder how Severus and Dumbledick will react to Harry being a parcelmouth.

    Author's Response: They won't find out for a while yet but when they do, it'll be mindblowing for all three of them. (Even Harry will have conflicting feelings when he finds out.) Thanks a lot for your review!
Title: A New Plan 03 Dec 2014 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love having professor Sprout in the story a lovely character! Thank you a great chapter and once again Dumbledore is a fool!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm sorry for the late response. I'm just beginning to understand how this site works. It's great that you liked my adding Professor Sprout to the story. She always gets left out of everything. I figured that I'd give Hufflepuff house a voice too. I like the idea of a house based on kindness (although I myself am a proud Slytherin.)
Title: Defense Lessons 03 Dec 2014 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Powerful chapter thank you
Title: Harry's Arrival 03 Dec 2014 12:27 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A bit confusing but very good,
    Could you put a line or a break when the scene changes as I thought the dream was one of Harry's
Title: A New Plan 27 Nov 2014 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you write more, this is a wonderful start!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I plan on updating once a week. This is probably going to be a long story with Harry slowly getting to know Snape and his dark past.
Title: A New Plan 27 Nov 2014 2:08 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Sprout and Severus are friends. Since herbology and potions would seem to go hand in hand, they would have some things in common. She doesn't come up too often in stories so it's nice to see her in a more active role.

    Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! Reviews just make my day. You're right about Professor Sprout. She's not even listed as one of the characters but I thought that Severus would go to her for potion ingredients. I also pictured eleven year old Severus hiding in the greenhouse when everything became too much. Thanks again for the review!
Title: Defense Lessons 27 Nov 2014 1:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Now, now, Harry. You can't move on to advanced until you master the basics. Though it would have been helpful if Snape had mentioned that. It sounds like Snape learned more than he ever thought he would.
Title: Harry's Arrival 27 Nov 2014 1:43 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the way you set the mood for Snape's house. The stillness and darkness in the building must have creeped out Harry. Snape's dream was interesting and I'm looking forward to finding out more.
Title: A New Plan 26 Nov 2014 4:58 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I'm looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping to update once a week.

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