Wow! I liked this story. A little dark more than I like, but it felt real.
Thank you!
| Title: The First Step
| 11 Nov 2020 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Idk I liked the manipulative scheming harry- have Dumbledore destroy his letter and basically blame james isn't sitting right with me 😤🤷 but whatever
| Title: A Change of Image
| 11 Nov 2020 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Ugh phuck off Hermione you're not his bloody mum
| Title: The Letter
| 11 Nov 2020 6:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh my gosh. Harry has to kill his "father" or be disowned... That's not cool james but also screw you Snape! (Although partly I think maybe Lily lied but idk enough yet, maybe Snape really did rape her, it just doesn't seem like him) gosh it never said how far Harry needs to go. To satisfy the natqah does he need to kill Snape? Would it be enough to let Voldemort know of snapes spy status-- he'd certainly be tortured or even killed for it! Or does Harry have to do something hands on like stab Snape in the heart. Or poisoning, would that work or be too passive? Oh james you can't send a 16 year old boy on a revenge mission with no instructions but to trust Dumbledore (cause yeah Dumbledore *isn't* that trustworthy or James and Lily would still be alive)
| Title: The First Step
| 26 Aug 2018 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: A Different Perspective
| 26 Aug 2018 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: A Different Perspective
| 26 Aug 2018 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Painful Truths
| 26 Aug 2018 10:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Summonned By Voldemort
| 26 Aug 2018 10:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very dramatic scene
| Title: Veritaserum
| 26 Aug 2018 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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