Thanks for writing this missing scene. It was moving, and I’m glad they came to an understanding.
omg.
glad that they have reached an understanding.
great job
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you thought this was good. I worried about it. I really appreciate the feedback!
Hmm, got emotional a bit lol. I always like stories where Sev realizes the abuse in the pensive memory. Good work
Author's Response: Thank you. I've always believed that Severus spoke to Dumbledore about what he witnessed during the Occlumency lessons with Harry, and that's why the Order spoke with the Dursleys, though, of course I did not tackle that belief in this particular story. Thank you for reading, and for letting me know that you thought this was good. I appreciate that.
I enjoyed that. I really like how you managed to keep Snape seeming properly mean, even when he was being nice.
Author's Response: I am so glad that it worked out, and that Snape seemed in character (mean), even being nice. I was struggling to maintain the right balance with this.
Wow, this is great! I loved this version of Harry apologizing. Great job with the memories and emotions. Everyone seemed very in character. Loved it.
Author's Response: I am happy to hear that. I was worried that it would be too emotional, or out of character, etc. I have seen others tackle this scene, and am not sure why the prompt that I chose led me to writing this, but I am glad that you liked it.
Loved the idea! Maybe I'm tired and couldn't follow along as well as usual, but does the story jump a little from Snape getting ready to do something, then dropping Harry, and then helping Harry. Maybe I'm just tired....
Loved the jist!
Author's Response: I don't believe that Snape dropped Harry at all. Thank you for reading, and for letting me know you liked the idea, even though you didn't follow the story well, and weren't too certain of it.
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