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Reviews For Harry's Lucky Find
Title: Chapter 1 05 Feb 2015 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorcerer's apprentice comes to mind! Lovely story!
Title: Chapter 4 04 Feb 2015 4:34 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a very sweet story. I like how it ended happily, and how Snape took on the role of mentor for Harry prior to him going to Hogwarts. It is such a lovely ending.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I always like a happy ending.
Title: Chapter 4 03 Feb 2015 4:04 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a fun story. I'm glad that Harry will be learning about magic with Severus. He will still get protection from staying with the Dursleys but they will get a break from each other until Harry goes to Hogwarts. Good solution and everyone is happy.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much for reviewing. I had fun writing this.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Feb 2015 4:00 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry must have been full of questions after his taste of magic with Severus. I don't remember seeing it and was wondering how old Harry is in the story?

    Author's Response: I left it a bit open as I don't have much contact with that age group these days, but was thinking of Harry being about nine. Old enough - in Petunia's eyes - to be left alone for a couple of hours, but still some way off of Hogwarts.
Title: Chapter 2 03 Feb 2015 3:54 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    After hearing that Marge and Ripper were on the way, Harry was probably less reluctant to leave with Snape. I like the way you are portraying the Dursleys. Some of the abuse stories seem too over the top sometimes. It's nice to see them as annoyed at Harry's magic but not beating the snot out of him.

    Author's Response: Yes, nice bit of persuasion by Petunia. I agree about OTT abuse in a lot of stories - not my cup of tea.
Title: Chapter 1 03 Feb 2015 3:49 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry got a decent lunch. Petunia must have been in the Christmas spirit. Harry made a lucky find. I enjoyed him trying to find where the batteries were stores in the 'swishy stick.'
Title: Chapter 4 01 Feb 2015 9:15 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was so sweet! Good work!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. (Still looking out hopefully for another chapter of eruption!) 

Title: Chapter 4 30 Jan 2015 6:04 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    rosina, this is your best story yet! I loved it all the way through, and it's terrific to see how Harry's life changed for the better after one wand swish from Snape! Thanks for a fabulous read!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comments on all 4 of my mini-chapters. Hmm, my best story? I had less time to spend on this than most previous posts, so maybe that's the way forward!
Title: Chapter 3 30 Jan 2015 5:59 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Harry's chatter and way of seeing things! His actions (like planning to use Accio) and reactions (Dumbledore's head) are charming and true to life. Love the Charm Snape used on him at the end! Hee! Probably ALL parents would give their left arm for that one! ;-)
Title: Chapter 2 30 Jan 2015 5:46 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Unique approach with the promissory notes and explanation of owls from Petunia's point of view. Her sarcasm really comes through!

    Author's Response: Good! I always thought she was entitled to be a bit annoyed at the way Harry was dumped on the step.

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