Good old SIrius thank you again for a brilliant story
You slacked only because of the lack of detail... Its not much, but it made the whole thing lose its high appeal... I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep writing, you are really good. I suppose I am just disappointed at the lack of activity in this chapter unlike the previous ones... don't mind me.
| Title: Safe
| 26 Apr 2015 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic! I am so hooked, a chapter is never long enough ;)
| Title: Safe
| 26 Apr 2015 6:41 pm
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| Reviewer: hl (Anonymous)
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Slacked???!!! This is the best chapter so far. Amazing. Thank you for writing.
I'm cheering for Sirius right now.
As good as the entire story has been I wonder if you slacked in this chapter. In a way it beats a lot of what I have read till now; but I think you could do way better. Best of Luck in the next chapter.
Author's Response: In what way do you think I slacked?
Woah! Yay! Sirius to the rescue! Although I wonder if vampire Harry can freeze to death or not. Would it hurt him? Can other things still hurt him? I wonder what Snape is up to, and I hope that with a wand Sirius can find some more food! That would be a big help for both of them. Great chapter. Thanks for continuing to write! I look forward to every update!
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