| Title: Shot in the Dark
| 16 May 2015 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Took them long enough and then they had to be told! Typical of the preconceptions everyone has of Harry! Thank you for highlighting this!
Ooooo cliffie!! LOL loved this chapter, especially that last part. And poor Ron! I'm so glad he's looking out for Harry. :0)
Wow, we don't often get to see Ron as the mature one in the group. I really enjoy your version a lot! At first he seemed somewhat two dimensional but he seems like a really lovely character now. Well done! Fantastic work! What a cliffie to end on though. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Dun! Dun! Dun!
Getting GOOD here!
Short and sweet, its really good, in fact I could swear that each chapter is topping the last one now.
| Title: Shot in the Dark
| 10 May 2015 12:49 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!!!!!!
This story is amazing! I can't wait for more!
I love this so much it hurts. Why does there have to be a cliff hanger?? D: Thank you for the update!
One word: FINALLY!
I think this may be my favorite chapter yet. Great job, update soon!
| Title: Shot in the Dark
| 09 May 2015 2:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Y'know, you are as much of a torment as Snapegirl. You write wonderful chapters, then leave it on cliffies! Gah, more please!
Omg. Poor Harry.
I am glad though, that they all know, because now he will be taken care of properly.
Very original story. Sorry, I have been meaning to review for awhile, but always get distracted by something in my life.
Can't wait for next chapter.
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