I love Sirius so much. Like a lot. I kind of wish he'd pop into his human form so that Harry knew, but of course, I know that's not possible right now.
SEV. UGH, SEV! STOP BEING AN ASS!
I really hope someone figures out what the hell is going on soon. Poor Harry is losing whatever hope he's been clinging to!
| Title: Being Stubborn
| 02 May 2015 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Abba (Anonymous)
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Sooo perfect, braethtaking. During this short chapter you made me cry twice ;) Please update really soon!
| Title: Being Stubborn
| 02 May 2015 8:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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| Title: Being Stubborn
| 02 May 2015 6:53 am
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| Reviewer: hl (Anonymous)
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Poor Sirius. I am surprised he hasnt already figured out which rat Harry ate. At this point, even if they could prove the dead rat was Peter, Harry might end up in Azkaban for murder. I am eager to see how Harry and Sirius get out of this mess.
You slacked only because of the lack of detail... Its not much, but it made the whole thing lose its high appeal... I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep writing, you are really good. I suppose I am just disappointed at the lack of activity in this chapter unlike the previous ones... don't mind me.
| Title: Safe
| 26 Apr 2015 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic! I am so hooked, a chapter is never long enough ;)
| Title: Safe
| 26 Apr 2015 6:41 pm
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| Reviewer: hl (Anonymous)
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Slacked???!!! This is the best chapter so far. Amazing. Thank you for writing.
I'm cheering for Sirius right now.
As good as the entire story has been I wonder if you slacked in this chapter. In a way it beats a lot of what I have read till now; but I think you could do way better. Best of Luck in the next chapter.
Author's Response: In what way do you think I slacked?
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