touching moment between severus and harry!!
like severus' thoughts as he roam through the castle...
| Title: 12) Write based off of a sentence found at the HP Idea Generator
| 04 Aug 2015 6:03 am
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| Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed)
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feel for severus that lily want tp meet up with him,, by the lake! maybe peter was following voldie's under, or trying to get on james's side...
| Title: 8) Strange connections
| 16 Feb 2015 9:18 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Nice set of scenes, and why should Harry only have seen Dumbledore at 'Kings Cross'?
| Title: 3) Seeing the sunrise
| 16 Feb 2015 9:11 pm
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| Title: 18) Someone is having a panic attack
| 16 Feb 2015 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Another good chapter - you have a real knack for filling out what could definitely have been a character's thoughts on a particular event.
Author's Response: Thank you! When doing GCSEs, my English teacher told us we should never, ever pick the question that asked you to write in a character's POV, because it was the hardest thing to do. Perhaps unsurprisingly, I always gained my best marks for questions like that :P
| Title: 12) Write based off of a sentence found at the HP Idea Generator
| 16 Feb 2015 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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What a great idea, not anything I've read before. It's tempting to wish for more, but that was just right.
| Title: 2) Mourning/1) Your choice - reflection
| 16 Feb 2015 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I liked that - it's not often that you get a story where Harry ponders the turn of events when on the Horcrux hunt, and you have nailed what he would surely have been thinking really well.
| Title: 3) Seeing the sunrise
| 14 Feb 2015 11:52 am
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| Title: 8) Strange connections
| 14 Feb 2015 11:50 am
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