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Title: Chapter 4 28 Dec 2015 2:50 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you made Harry speaking in the third person a problem
Title: Chapter 4 19 Mar 2015 7:29 pm
Reviewer: LOVE4SPOCK (Signed) [Report This]
    This storyline is so wonderful! It's getting me teary-eyed.

    I'm looking forward to more!

    Please update soon!

    :-)

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    Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it! Thank for the support and I will!
Title: Chapter 4 16 Mar 2015 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    So sweet and so sad! Thank you for a wonderful story and chapter

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 15 Mar 2015 7:12 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Loved the interaction between Albus and Draco. I also liked how Severus finally realized how he was treating Harry. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, Albus and Draco I have something in mind for them too :) Stay tuned.
Title: Chapter 4 15 Mar 2015 4:51 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for a lovely long chapter, although I still seemed to reach the end too quickly. There are glimmers of hope that Severus will do a good job with the boys, but no doubt here will be problems along the way. Remus as a helper? Could be interesting if Severus goes for that option.

    Author's Response: That is how it tends to go lol, I like Remus I think Sev might need some Help at times and I know once Poppy tells Albus that, he'll start meddling, what else? lol Sev may not have a choice, or the choice could be made for him..so many options 
Title: Chapter 4 14 Mar 2015 6:03 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter!

    You've really done a great job in capturing some important, but hard to define, mental pathways that Severus must get rid of and why. From realizing he needs help in caring for three toddlers to curbing his instinctive tone of voice towards "Potters". The "ah ha" moment Severus has with regards to Harry giving up on people was poignant.

    I can't wait for more! This is definitely one of the best de-aging and Severus-as-a-parental figure out there. You're not glossing over the things that make these sorts of stories realistic - like trust is not just freely given towards authority figures when a kid has been abused. They have to earn in the hard way. Day by day. For every two steps forward, there will be one step back and they can't ever loose their patience or it will all be lost.

    Well done!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

     

    Severus does learn, he's just stubborn, and while he's given up for the moment of Potter...he still has a way to go in regards to Neville. I love that I have you a reader, your review is awesome. Directly the point I was trying to make. I have seen alot of stories(including some of my own) where Harry trusts him automatically. I didn't want one of those right now, and with kids being unpredicatable it has come a long way. Thanks for coming along for the ride. 

Title: Chapter 4 14 Mar 2015 2:25 pm
Reviewer: karisma (Signed) [Report This]
    Who could send you flames for this? It's SO SWEET! Tears gushing down my face-sweet! I love it!

    Author's Response: People send flames all the time for no reason other then because the internet makes then anonymous. I prepare myself for flames when I write that so it can role off. I love that you loved it! Reviews like that makes me type even faster!

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