| Title: Chapter 11
| 07 Jan 2016 9:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it thank you so much
Two hours! I'm so envious. Neville is such a wise little boy, and its nice that he and cute Draco get time to shine in your story. Look forward to finding out if Remus can sort himself out enough to be useful.
Author's Response: Yeah, I type really fast, and my fingers fly on the keyboard when I really get into my writing. Honestly there should be no escuse why I dont update as frequently anymore lol. I'm so glad you adored this chapter, and Remus will be okay I promise.
Amazing story. NL needs his own carer and it cant be remus . SB will also be HP obsessed so who will fit? Pomona? They need a female around.
Author's Response: Remus needed a reality check he got it, here. He'll be okay, however I see your point with Pomona and regarding some greenhouses in the back of the Manor. Ooh...you just gave me an idea! Thanks!
Awww That's cute. (and to your note in the previous chapter, my niece is 6 and I can barely understand what she's trying to tell me half the time. ;) My nephews (8 and 6) are a lot better though. But I don't think they are 'talking' would be out of character. So ignore all of those who say so.)
Author's Response: Yeah I did just that, after that authors note, as I knew firsthand so I'm keeping it, if they dont like they can just take a hike! So glad you liked this chapter, thanks for the support means a lot
I liked this chapter because it was realistic. Just because Remus's mistakes have been pointed out doesn't mean anything will change. Getting over jealously is a bitch to do. Most people struggle their entire lives with it. So....Kudos on capturing that in Remus. He's willing to hurt harry in order to sooth his own irrational jealously. Same with Severus previously. It's a human condition. Can't really condemn Remus for feeling it, only how he acts upon it.
Author's Response: That is very true, Remus is extremely loyal though you know to who he considers pack. And if the wolf in him as you read a bit in here was a bit annoyed with him he'll definitly be coming around. Especialy if he wants anything to do with Sirius. Albus will be in this next bit like always and they will all have a little chat.
I just started your story today and have read all 11 chapters! Such a sweet story. :). Waiting on the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you liked it
Hope they have a good Christmas.
Author's Response: Oh they will :)
| Title: Chapter 11
| 29 Dec 2015 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenixsong (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter! It's nice to see Severus bonding with each of the boys in different ways. Now if Lupin could get his act together! I'm really interested to see what happens to Draco's personality (and the others) when they re-age.
Author's Response: I know me too, but its way to early to think about those chapters yet. If I do, I'll end up writing them first and then have a block >.< lol so I'm just as excited as you but we have to be patient a bit longer.
Draco is adorable
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is lol
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