Right, so they let a stolen poisonous snake go in the middle of a muggle town, in winter? That is anything but responsible, not every idea is a good one! It rings very fake that in the holiday crowd nobody remarks on those well-known men suddenly going around with minor relatives.
Author's Response: It's fanfiction. If you're looking for realisticness, look elsewhere. Clearly this story isn't for you.
Lovely long chapter. (Sorry, but I had to laugh at the first paragraph - sunshine at 6.45am in England in December? No chance!! Perhaps it was a magical window.:-D). The boys were so funny in the swearing scene, and in not wanting to miss out on anything. They're going to sleep well after such an exciting day! I hope Remus makes the most of his extra chance, and I look forward to finding out what gifts everyone bought.
Author's Response: Yeah I thinking it was a magical window, England isnt really known for it's sun in the summer. I should have specified lol
Title: Chapter 12
| 07 Jan 2016 10:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a lovely long chapter
Author's Response: You're welcome, thank you for taking the time out to review it
I say Harry should keep the snake.
Author's Response: Theres no pioint in this story for him too, and hes four..its just not plausible
I say harry should keep the snake.
LOL, I'm dying here when thinking about the hassle this outing must have been. The phrase "patience of a saint" comes to mind. It also sound exhausting.
Author's Response: Right? I would have long declared it it over and shuffled on home lol. Can you imagine how exhausted Severus would be lol
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