Good to see the little boys one more time. Surprised that Lucius really does seem to love Draco, despite where he's been leading him. Here's hoping the reaging has a good outcome all round.
You're so lucky you never got caught Draco.
I've thoroughly enjoyed this story since the beginning, and it was about time I left a review. The fact that it's written well and edited is already enough to draw me in haha but the way you've developed all the characters is wonderful! I feel like Snape was a bit out of character with how quickly he changed, but everyone enjoys some fluff every now and then. This is one of my favorite fanfics, and I'm looking forward to your next update!
like the appearing of Lucius! hope another alert appear soon! great job on the chapie!!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 18 Mar 2017 9:44 pm
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Very good! It all looked as if it was going through smoothly and now this, great plot twist thank you
| Title: Chapter 16
| 18 Mar 2017 9:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely long chapter thank you so much
Finally there is something I agree with Albus on: Dudley isn't innocent and his actions can't be hand-waved away. He needs both punishment and counseling.
There's still time to make things right between you and Draco Lucius.
Right, so they let a stolen poisonous snake go in the middle of a muggle town, in winter? That is anything but responsible, not every idea is a good one! It rings very fake that in the holiday crowd nobody remarks on those well-known men suddenly going around with minor relatives.
Author's Response: It's fanfiction. If you're looking for realisticness, look elsewhere. Clearly this story isn't for you.
Poor Neville. Great story
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