Awww. Poor Harry.
Author's Response: It'll get better
| Title: Chapter 14
| 19 May 2016 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it all thank you. Just a small point "buddy" is not usually used in the UK and as it is slang I doubt if Severus would use it even if he knew it! It doesn't matter but it does jar a little in the wonderful story.
Author's Response: I've read it in other HP stories, and I have a few english friends who say depending on the location and the family it can be used so I took it from them. Buddy reads better then honey, because honestly its hard to imagine Sev ever saying that to anyone but Lily.
Hope Harry can be found before anything disastrous happens. He and Draco have still got so much to learn about relationships.
hoping that harry is okay!! draco is still jealous, at time ( hope he out grow it). love the christmas eve scene- the boys played outisde, open their one present (remind of my childhood), watching christmas movie!! just love christmas moments in any fic!!
I hope they find Harry soon.
Author's Response: They will not to worry
One perfect Christmas, was that too much to ask? Then again, we were all expecting the green eyed monster to rear its ugly head sooner or later in Draco. Still, after this, it might be a good idea to give the boys separate rooms. As well as Harry was doing, he's very fragile when it comes to getting others' positive opinion. And with Draco outright saying something like that? Yeah. Words hurt, especially if a weapon that's been used frequently before.
Author's Response: With these guys? Yeah it was too much lol. Everyone was especting Draco to react this way, it's sad actually. That no one gave him the benefit of the doubt. Ideally, one would think to give them seperate rooms, but Harry himself may not go for it. I'm listening, trust me lol, but you'll see in the next upcoming chapters i promise. Draco just needs to understand that Godson is different then Son, he needs perpective and he'll get it and he'll understand or he'll lose his friends.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 16 May 2016 4:20 am
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| Reviewer: Karri (Anonymous)
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OMG What a cliff hanger. Great chapter, post more soon!!
Aww poor Harry and severus can't get a break.
Author's Response: They really can't lol
| Title: Chapter 14
| 16 May 2016 3:10 am
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| Reviewer: Luna (Anonymous)
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What? You had to leave it there? gah! so angsty and cute at the same time.
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