I liked this chapter because it was realistic. Just because Remus's mistakes have been pointed out doesn't mean anything will change. Getting over jealously is a bitch to do. Most people struggle their entire lives with it. So....Kudos on capturing that in Remus. He's willing to hurt harry in order to sooth his own irrational jealously. Same with Severus previously. It's a human condition. Can't really condemn Remus for feeling it, only how he acts upon it.
Author's Response: That is very true, Remus is extremely loyal though you know to who he considers pack. And if the wolf in him as you read a bit in here was a bit annoyed with him he'll definitly be coming around. Especialy if he wants anything to do with Sirius. Albus will be in this next bit like always and they will all have a little chat.
I just started your story today and have read all 11 chapters! Such a sweet story. :). Waiting on the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you liked it
Hope they have a good Christmas.
Author's Response: Oh they will :)
| Title: Chapter 11
| 29 Dec 2015 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenixsong (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter! It's nice to see Severus bonding with each of the boys in different ways. Now if Lupin could get his act together! I'm really interested to see what happens to Draco's personality (and the others) when they re-age.
Author's Response: I know me too, but its way to early to think about those chapters yet. If I do, I'll end up writing them first and then have a block >.< lol so I'm just as excited as you but we have to be patient a bit longer.
Draco is adorable
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is lol
I like how the boys' roles reversed with the dealing and Neville becoming more mature, it was interesting to see the change...
I like how you made Harry speaking in the third person a problem
I like how you show the spectrum of different childhoods with each boy
I've never seen a story with Neville deaged as well... Interesting
| Title: Chapter 10
| 15 Oct 2015 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenixsong (Anonymous)
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I was so happy to see a new chapter! I especially liked seeing Neville being addressed more. Hope the adults can work their own issues out to continue to help all the boys! I can't wait to read about Christmas.
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