This story is amazing! To be honest I had my doubts in the beginning but I have no regrets! Your writing is great, although you have the occasional grammar/spelling mistake, overall it is amazing! (Also if you even need/want a beta I would be willing!)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like the story. =) I will admit, my grammar is not the best, even though I do try! And thank you for willing to be my beta! I'll have to think about it, because I have never had one before, but I'm sure I'll let you know. (And btw, I love your username!)
| Title: Meet the Grandparents
| 10 Nov 2015 12:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Acop (Anonymous)
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Hi,
I am still intrigued and unsure about where you are going, how the wings will change the wizarding world comparing to J.K Rowling's.
Still very happy to read your story that remains unlike any other for now so looking forward to your next chapter :)
Cute and pulls at the heart strings
Lol snape and harrys grandparents
Great chapter! I really loved the interactions between Severus and Harry! Too cute, Harry will have Snape wrapped around his fingers before he knows it! :D Please do update again soon, I'm really enjoying reading this!!
And as for the last parent, Severus' father?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy reading this. And great guess! The parent who Dumbledore attacked will be discussed in the next chapter.
Nice long chapter. I always like a detailed shopping chapter, and that was a good one. I liked how Harry used his wings for protection when he was scared, and its good to see Snape happy to explain bits about the magical world and happy to take care of Harry. Also good to see a Dumbledore with a bit of a bite to him, not just a bumbling old softy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Awesome! Though the spelling needs work, it was realistic and interesting.
Author's Response: thank you! I dont use Microsft Word to write. I use Evernote instead, so the spell check isnt always correct. But thank you so much for reviewing.
| Title: A New Home For Summer
| 26 May 2015 12:25 pm
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| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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The story seems to be well thought of and arranged, for now I cannot see any writers block barring ur way... You are really good at this Sam
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
I love this story so far! Please tell me you'll be updating soon!!
Author's Response: Yes! I am almost done with the fourth chapter. It should be posted around Sunday, if not earlier.
| Title: A New Home For Summer
| 20 Mar 2015 7:30 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, cute Harry. Now I want to eat cheese and broccoli soup!
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