Lol. Who is adding rooms and things? Severus, Minerva, Dumbles?
The Chamber exploration was interesting. Who would have thought a Kelpie would turn up? It was nice to see the reactions of the various students, too. I did wonder how Snape rescued Harry from the Kelpie. He was tired when he scolded Harry so it must have been difficult for him but I didn't know how he did it.
| Title: Of Kelpies and Quiddich
| 19 Jul 2015 1:02 am
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| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Brilliant as always... I love how you have shown how Snape cares for Potter (in a weird way) and also how Malfoy is not everything he seemed to Potter before. I am looling forward to the next chapter... Btw, how did Harry manage to clean the teapot if tje pot was so horrible? Is Harry better than a house elf? Or are the teachers just negligent of hygiene?
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :) I think a house elf would insist on using soap to clean the teapot and some brits are a bit funny about that. I think he got through it with elbow grease.
| Title: Into the Chamber
| 16 Jul 2015 12:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Brilliant chapter I chuckled so much! You had everyone down to a T and then subtle changes for you universe, very clever thank you
| Title: Into the Chamber
| 13 Jul 2015 3:06 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Loved the Slytherins wanting the photos from the Chamber and Snape taking a group photo.
No gaps in this chapter, yay! It was so easy to read, and I loved it! Thank you!
Hey there! This is an awesome story idea, I'm really, really looking forward to more, though the gaps in the chapter were definitely getting on my nerves, you might want to go back and edit it if you can, sometimes P&S can be a pain with uploading new chapters, :) Loved it! You are a wonderful writer! Very original idea, made me really happy to see Harry not treated as a saint, I think the responsibilities will do him a whole lot of good!
Awesome chapter, as usual!
Cheery Owls. Hahahaha! I enjoyed the staffroom scene. I could imagine Snape being impatient and ready to bang his head against the table in frustration. The trip to the chamber is really interesting and I look forward to more in the next chapter.
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