Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3 19 Nov 2023 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]

    This is a good one! I wish there were more stories like this but this is one of my favorites out of what I've seen! I'd love to see what Harry's friends reactions would be, as well as the reaction of the world in general. And, of course, to see how Harry and Snape both struggle to adjust.

    Thanks for sharing 💜💜💜

Title: Chapter 3 08 Feb 2016 12:29 pm
Reviewer: Alexannah (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this. Poor Harry. It's definitely an interesting premise. My only criticism would be the long explanation of slavery history. It's really, really, really complicated, I couldn't follow it.

    My advice is, when something takes that many paragraphs to explain, it would be worth simplifying it, and maybe break the information up a bit--like for example, have Albus give them a basic overview/the bottom line first, and further details could come up in conversation later.

    That said, I think it's a good start, and I look forward to reading more.
Title: Chapter 3 29 Jan 2016 7:23 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I still continue to hope you'll continue this story...
Title: Chapter 3 22 Oct 2015 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please continue this. I want to know where you are taking it. It's such a great storyline so far. Please update!
Title: Chapter 3 05 Sep 2015 12:10 pm
Reviewer: Imladris Aura (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I like your fic, is very well writen, I would like to know how it continues. Please, I hope you will continue writing this story.
    Regards.
Title: Chapter 3 02 Aug 2015 5:11 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how this will work while their at Hogwarts.
Title: Chapter 3 10 Jul 2015 2:38 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please finish this story. It's such a unique premise with the back history and everything. I'm really eager to see where this going. Please please continue
Title: Chapter 3 16 Jun 2015 2:00 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Are you going to continue this story?
Title: Chapter 3 18 May 2015 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for an interesting story and ideas thank you
Title: Chapter 2 18 May 2015 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very complicated but very interesting thank you

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