Me encanta la forma de escritura, y la forma en la que se desenvuelven los personajes.
Me encanta la forma de escritura, y la forma en la que se desenvuelven los personajes.
Me encanta la forma de escritura, y la forma en la que se desenvuelven los personajes.
This story is absolute perfection. Thank you so very, very much.
This unfolded in just the right way. Harry just gained so much more than he lost.
I love the woods setting and the conversation there between Harry and Severus. So grateful to Severus for his healing help.
This chapter has some of the greatest, most brilliantly crafted lines, i.e., reasons, counting, being uncountable — all absolute perfection.
I love that they went on that hike together, and especially enjoyed their time at the creek. Absolutely lovely.
I love that Harry is starting to see Severus in a different light. The conversation as they leaned on the porch rail was a great turning point. I also love that Severus is seeing more of the realm Harry, and is starting to look out for him (I loved the clothes closet, by the way).
The angst in this chapter is perfect — poignant and compelling, as Harry reveals his fear and frustration, alternating between fight (when he’s bold and mouthy) and flight (when he runs). You’ve captured Severus so beautifully too, as he remains skeptical of prince Potter, but is also starting to see the realities before him. Thanks so much for this beautiful chapter.
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