Reviews For The Years Between
Author's Response: Thank you :) don't worry, I will continue this story. I have bits and pieces finished but the next chapter is still refusing to be written. It will come eventually :)
Author's Response: So did I :P It's a bit of a problem since not everything should revolve around them.
Author's Response: Haha, yes he should have. But he's also stubborn enough to do it anyway. Not to mention that in his mind, there is nobody to come with him. He hasn't acclimated to the new state of things.
Since people were mentioning it, I don't mind much Harry being with Ginny, I knew they'd have to decide whether to be together.
That said, I agree that relationships are mostly irrelevant for your plot. I'd rather you focused on magic, politics, teaching, Snape and Harry's relationship..
(BTW, I was wondering why Harry is so mature most times (eg. with Malfoy), yet sort of childish with Snape.)
Oh. It would be nice to know more about Snape's book, dark arts and the teaching thing. I hope we'll hear about the accidental magic soon.
Also, I'd love to see 'mature Harry' again, specially if it's around Snape.
Author's Response: Ha, good question. It's mostly because Harry isn't completely sure of himself. He is mature with the Malfoy's because he doesn't care about them. He deals well with Kingsley because they are friends of a sort. But Snape is an unknown. Harry realizes how important the man had been to Lily, and after seeing Snape's memories, he's gained a lot of respect for his professor. But after all the years of animosity, it's not easy to be completely comfortable. Not to mention how much of the past years he's still ignoring. Same goes for Snape, his behaviour is erratic as well. It will all change as the story goes on. After all, that is what the story is all about. Snape's book (including the dark arts), Harry's magic and the teaching thing will all return.
Author's Response: Thnx, next chapter is under construction :)
Author's Response: Ooh, you're right.. thanks for pointing that out, I'll fixed it right away :) And ThnQ for the review :)
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: ThnQ, I'm doing my best to keep that. It's going to be hard once I get further into the story, but I'll do my best.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought so. I hadn't actually thought about it until Ron started acting like a prat.. I've noticed that these characters like to do things I hadn't even considered. Which leads to me having to come up with reasons why, in this case why Ron should stop being an ass. I thought this made the most sense. Whether they are good or bad doesn't matter. They are children and Hogwarts is their best chance at creating a better life. As for Harry and Sev, it's not just the killing thing. There are so many ways those two could help each other.. Next chapter will be finished tonight but after that it will probably take a bit longer for a new update.
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