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Title: Chapter 14 27 Sep 2017 5:35 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron. Is. An. Idiot. A complete and utter idiot. Hermione has more that enough tact for both of them. His first mistake was going to Prince Manor, his second mistake was taking of the invisibility cloak and his third mistake was shouting Harry's name. According to me, he deserved what he got. Brainless prat.
Title: Chapter 13 27 Sep 2017 5:32 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    The words Harry and break never coincide. *snort*
    Severus does not need to be arrested of doing social work for the benefit of the society.
Title: Chapter 11 27 Sep 2017 5:27 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, you should probably get a Beta for this story, you have a few grammatical mistakes.
    It should be get past instead of get passed.
    And other few, anyway, I am waiting for something to happen to Draco!

    Author's Response: I actually do have a beta for this story. :) I probably overlooked it when editing.
Title: Chapter 10 26 Sep 2017 1:27 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    What's wrong with harry? What's wrong with Harry?
    Oh god, do you want to make my heart quit it's job?
    Have they done something to heal Harry that he could feel and is uncomfortable, or was he not sane when Harry and Snape were talking, or is he thinking that the reason Poppy was crying was because something was clearly wrong with him?
    A heart wrenching moment if one doesn't know what really is wrong with them.

    Author's Response: I know. I'm sorry. It gets explained in the next chapter. :)
Title: Chapter 9 26 Sep 2017 12:59 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know, but I started laughing when Snape cut Harry off for three times in succession!
    When Harry was repeating what Severus had done, I thought that he was confirming if all that happened in real or was that all too just a dream.
    *sigh* I truly feel bad for rape victims, and think of rapists as the most filthiest piece of shit ever known to exist on the planet. I hope that the last second of the bastard's life was very very painful. Anyway, I know that Harry won't like to see anyone at the moment, especially not Molly or Hermione, probably because they have a tendency to hug, which will most likely send harry into a flashback with all the skin contact. If Harry formed the protective bubble now, why didn't he form it before, when he knew that he wasn't safe with the bastard?

    Author's Response: It gets explained. I promise. I'm glad that you liked that part. :) I wanted to put a little levity there. I mean the entire thing was very somber. Thanks again. :)
Title: Chapter 8 26 Sep 2017 12:41 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, this chapter was also very nice, I liked it. I am happy that the Muggle didn't do anything other than that to Harry. I wish Severus hadn't killed him, he deserved much worse. Azkaban would have been average. What him, and other such people require is the Dementor's Kiss.

    Author's Response: So true! So very true.
Title: Chapter 7 26 Sep 2017 12:28 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my god, that would have been such a terrifying moment. For me at least. I have got goosebumps on my body, literally. When they said Sweet Merlin, Harry should have known that they were Wizards. Oh God! So sad, I hope Draco gets what he deserves now.

    Author's Response: Even though hearing it, it still didn't register to Harry. He'd been stuck there for almost three weeks. He didn't truly know who they were until they were on the bed untying him. 
Title: Chapter 6 26 Sep 2017 12:17 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    *shudder* I don't suppose it would be much if I say that I would like Harry to be unconscious when they find him? He would be very humiliated if conscious.
Title: Chapter 5 26 Sep 2017 12:11 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Did, did...... DRACO payed those horrible Muggles to kidnap Harry? That, that... viscous, nasty, horrible, vile, foul CREATURE! Try being in Harry's place Malfoy! At first I though that Draco was just happy and smug that Potter was no longer with him, but it looks like he knows whats happening to him, which means..... Oh God! I hate him!
    Nice chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I am glad that you found this story. :) Please continue to let me know what you think of it. :)

     

    Thank you! :) 

Title: Chapter 4 26 Sep 2017 11:55 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooh, I like this, especially that you don't give anything too explicit. Poor Harry, though I think Severus was being very irresponsible. He should have checked out when Harry didn't show up.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! :) I didn't want to get too explicit for several reasons; one, I don't think I could have written it, and, two, it would not have been allowed on this site (one of the things I like about this site). 

    I am glad that you like my story so far and I hope that you continue with it. Thank you again for your support. :) 


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