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Reviews For Antithesis
Severus does not need to be arrested of doing social work for the benefit of the society.
It should be get past instead of get passed. And other few, anyway, I am waiting for something to happen to Draco! Author's Response: I actually do have a beta for this story. :) I probably overlooked it when editing.
Oh god, do you want to make my heart quit it's job? Have they done something to heal Harry that he could feel and is uncomfortable, or was he not sane when Harry and Snape were talking, or is he thinking that the reason Poppy was crying was because something was clearly wrong with him? A heart wrenching moment if one doesn't know what really is wrong with them. Author's Response: I know. I'm sorry. It gets explained in the next chapter. :)
When Harry was repeating what Severus had done, I thought that he was confirming if all that happened in real or was that all too just a dream. *sigh* I truly feel bad for rape victims, and think of rapists as the most filthiest piece of shit ever known to exist on the planet. I hope that the last second of the bastard's life was very very painful. Anyway, I know that Harry won't like to see anyone at the moment, especially not Molly or Hermione, probably because they have a tendency to hug, which will most likely send harry into a flashback with all the skin contact. If Harry formed the protective bubble now, why didn't he form it before, when he knew that he wasn't safe with the bastard? Author's Response: It gets explained. I promise. I'm glad that you liked that part. :) I wanted to put a little levity there. I mean the entire thing was very somber. Thanks again. :)
Author's Response: So true! So very true.
Author's Response: Even though hearing it, it still didn't register to Harry. He'd been stuck there for almost three weeks. He didn't truly know who they were until they were on the bed untying him.
Nice chapter. Author's Response: I am glad that you found this story. :) Please continue to let me know what you think of it. :)
Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I didn't want to get too explicit for several reasons; one, I don't think I could have written it, and, two, it would not have been allowed on this site (one of the things I like about this site). I am glad that you like my story so far and I hope that you continue with it. Thank you again for your support. :) |
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