Title: Albus Severus
| 22 Nov 2017 4:00 pm
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Ha. ... Thank you. He does live and they do meet. Ah, it feels much better. Ps. Glitch: ..'She is Ron's sister and Harry's husband'? eh? His Wife, I hope, or did you bluntly mean she has the trousers on too much in their marriage? I never did like she wasn't more loyal to her Harry, and could 'persuade' the intransigent,pigheaded Ron to let Harry love Severus uncontested, and grieve over his loss. Ron has his Arthur; and I do like Ron, he is an everyday chap, much needed between the Hero and the genius. He is brill in Friendlyquark's fic: "A Terrible Temptation." Thank you for writing this poetic vignette about Harry and Severus - I return to it.
"Looking for something, Mr. Potter?" made me cry, the day after Alan Rickman died. There's an odd phrase here and there which could be tweaked a bit, but I'm favoriting this story. Thanks for having written it.
Title: Albus Severus
| 12 Jul 2015 9:23 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting thank you
Title: Albus Severus
| 08 Jul 2015 12:07 am
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Reviewer: Elsie (Anonymous)
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This made me cry ;( But great story! I loved it.
I had to read this after I read the first story. Love it! I do hope theres more to come...
WOAH! So, Snape is ALIVE?! Ahhhh!! What, how? Awesome. Oh how I wish to know more! Fantastic!
Title: Albus Severus
| 07 Jul 2015 4:56 am
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Reviewer: Erin (Anonymous)
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Beautifully written! It's nice to see characters that are still affected by the war so many years later; it didn't wrap up as cleanly as is sometimes portrayed!
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