muah hahaha I love how Snape's voice just came out of nowhere. I loved reading the story so much the first time that I had to read it again. Love love love. Great job!
Nice little oneshot. Poor Harry, though. Never fun when you just wanna sleep but can't.
| Title: Guard Duty
| 21 Jul 2015 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely original story thank you
Great story! I liked how the ending was a bit ambiguous about whether or not Snape will ever learn the true story of Harry's "spoiledness."
Awesome! Wonderfully done! The characters are sooo in character.I loved invisible Snape. Fantastic! Loved the conversations and character thoughts. Well done!
I love this!
So well done. Wish there was more.
Glad Snape could see the true Harry for a chance.
well done.
Great response to the challenge, and you found the perfect way to get Snape interested in Harry's activities and situation. It was good to see Harry being proactive and a bit sneaky too.
Excellent as always.... Maybe you can continue from this... not make it a oneshot perhaps?
I wanted to answer this challenge so much for the fest, but could not think of an original idea, and here you come with this amazing story that is so much better than what I would have written it! I adore it, the slight humor in several spots made me smile, Harry stomping his feet so that the Dursley's would think he was working, haha! And the floating 'cauldron' while Vernon is talking to Harry...just brilliant. Thank you so much! I hope to read more of your stories!
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