This was fun to read! 'Kind of wanted it to keep going!!!
Oooh, I love the premise of this story! Your writing style is so smooth and pleasant to read, and I like how you didn’t immediately escalate issues, but rather leave a trail of breadcrumbs so I can have something to look forward to later in the story. I’m so glad you decided to build upon your oneshot, good luck!
Enjoyable! I liked the unusual spin of Harry brewing potions in the garden shed, while Severus was on guard duty.
Its a really great story but it just feels like it is incomplete . I would really like it if you write this story further . I don't mean to offend you or anything . its just a friendly request.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Sep 2018 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for continuing your excellent story. I loved the patio melting and Vernon's reaction to the Wizards appearing and disappearing!
loved it. A perfect picture of them all standing transfixed as the purple goo seeped out of the drain! They might have got rid of Harry for a bit, but he's left a memento. Hah, did Snape really not see that coming? I'd really like to see how Harry and Snape get along (or not)if you get inspired.
Wait end, as no more? or end as the end of the chapter? I want more? What happens next? ;)
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