Please can Dobby be caught in this story and not HP be blamed!
OMG !!! Update please!!!!!!! I have too know how it continues!! My heart shattered right along with Marble :(
Ohhhhh. Noooooooo!!!! Marble!!!!! Poor Harry! I hope Snape is understanding that this was not Harry's fault. I hope the situation looks like Harry didn't do it. I really, really hope Marble can be fixed!
Great chapter. I am dying to know how Snape takes it. I think Harry will be heart broken. Thanks for the update!
Oh no! Marble has to be fixable, the story wouldn't be the same without him. Post the next part quick!
|Title: Chapter 22
||17 Dec 2016 9:50 pm
|Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
Very good blend of cannon and AU thank you
I don't know why, but knowing that Marble was enchanted in some way makes Dobby seem cruel and this story more interesting
Great job and I think the chapter flowed well. That ending has me wishing for more. I can't wait to see what happens and what trouble Harry gets in.
Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one. Hope Sev listens to what Harry says first instead of yelling at him
Heh, I think Harry could have watched a documentary in the theater and he still would have ended up just as enthusiastic.