I read this story long ago and am back for another read. I love your characterization of Snape and how young Harry is.
A great start! Poor Harry. It'd be just like the Dursleys to abandon him in such a way. The image of Snape re-emerging from the kitchen with a knife and fork without explanation gave me a good chuckle!
I love stories that have first year harry in them, because he's been introduced to magic but nothings really set for him yet and he's still innocent.. Plus there's a lot of directions the story can got to, can't wait to read moreM
I love stories that have first year harry in them, because he's been introduced to magic but nothings really set for him yet and he's still innocent.. Plus there's a lot of directions the story can got to, can't wait to read moreM
So the Dursleys didn't bother to pick up Harry. Dumbledore won't be happy about that. Poor Harry seemed to be doing a lot of falling and stumbling. After such a long day, he must have been glad to get to bed, even if it was hard.
Title: Chapter 1
| 26 Jul 2015 7:48 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love your Severus very cannon but with a sense of humour! Very good start thank you
Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jul 2015 10:56 pm
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Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Well-written and enjoyable. I look forward to more!
Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jul 2015 8:45 pm
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Reviewer: Hilary (Anonymous)
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A very nice start! Your depiction of Snape is spot-on, and I'm enjoying the younger Harry (it's been awhile since I've read a fic with a younger Harry). Please do continue with this. I look forward to reading what's to come!
This was a really great chapter, thanks. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D
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