Great job and I think the chapter flowed well. That ending has me wishing for more. I can't wait to see what happens and what trouble Harry gets in.
| Title: Chapter 22
| 13 Dec 2016 12:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one. Hope Sev listens to what Harry says first instead of yelling at him
Heh, I think Harry could have watched a documentary in the theater and he still would have ended up just as enthusiastic.
| Title: Chapter 21
| 22 Sep 2016 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter!
I was so glad to see an update! I really enjoy this story!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 04 Sep 2016 4:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter thank you. I like how Severus is portrayed by you he is not coddling but in his own style very kind.
That Severus is doing anything for Harry in the first place is more than he's ever had -just for his birthday- before. Sure, there was Diagon Alley on his 11th, but that was more for school than his birthday. And I wouldn't be surprised if Hedwig was a truly last-minute thing as Hagrid walked by the Owl Emporium.
I look forward to reading how Harry's trip to the movie theatre goes!
That nightmare was probably more hurtful than any gory one he's had.
What a gift, having an entire trunk full of your parent's things. But now I'm worried because that's a lot of stuff and Harry doesn't have anyplace safe to keep it short of putting it all (or nearly all) back into his Gringotts vault. What would be absolutely wonderful, is if Harry could keep things at Severus' place during the school year. And not just the things like Lily's wedding dress, but like his first-year school books as well. But there's still time. There's still a little over a month left of summer, and then the entire school year, to figure things out. Since Harry now has his mother's Strawberry Meadows, I don't see it much of a stretch for Severus to give Harry the foal as a companion. Because one just does not a herd make.
Well, at least with Harry's birthday, he's not expecting much, if anything. I have a feeling that Severus has been stressing over it more than Harry even bothers to think on it beyond the passive thought. Hopefully, no matter what Severus comes up with, it'll lead to Harry being pleasantly surprised.
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