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Title: Avoiding Sleep 30 Mar 2022 11:29 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I really enjoyed this. I’m looking forward to finding out why everyone but Harry has memories from their adjusted lives.
Title: Avoiding Sleep 06 Sep 2015 2:14 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    You say... you say there's no pairing between our guys, but then you do something like have Remus put a hand on Sev's arm and mollify him with a single line and my shipper heart! My shipper heart, DOC, it doesn't believe you!

    Totally in love with your portrayal of this little family. It's just so wonderful - even how Severus and Sirius still don't quite get along but somehow do at the same time - absolutely well-portrayed. Bravo.

    Author's Response:

    I do ship these guys, but wasn't sure if others would appreciate it, so I leave that up to the reader to interpret.  I am very happy that you caught those little nuances of touch -- for some reason the muse insisted on them, even though I tried hard to keep it gen. I didn't want to be overt with the relationship, though, in my head, it was there.

    I was hoping that the characters wouldn't come across as OOC, given who I was gathering together be Harry's new family. I think that Sirius and Severus will always feel a little animosity for each other. 

    THANK YOU! 

Title: Avoiding Sleep 07 Aug 2015 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved every sentence thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D This makes me very happy to hear. 
Title: Avoiding Sleep 04 Aug 2015 2:12 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I saw you had some reservations about this chapter but I enjoyed it. I thought it had a dreamlike quality as though Harry was wishing it would be true but not totally believing it. Too much detail would have been overwhelming for Harry at this point, if that makes sense. The backstory of the three men agreeing to put aside their differences for Harry was nice and I liked the way the three got along. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for assuaging my worries over this chapter. I felt that it neeed to be written this way, but worried that it would come off as summarizing. Thank you for putting into words what it was that I couldn't seem to (funny thing for a writer). I'm glad that you liked this, and hope that you will like the next chapter. You've eased my mind. 
Title: Avoiding Sleep 04 Aug 2015 1:47 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! Please don't make him go back, I will cry.

    Author's Response: Just one more chapter to go. I hope that you'll approve of the ending. Thank you so very much for reading. :-)
Title: Avoiding Sleep 03 Aug 2015 11:13 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry just tugged at my heart strings. Love the three uncles interaction.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm so relieved to hear that. 

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