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Title: Chapter 5 06 Jun 2022 1:24 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting, I like how thoughtful Narcissa is being.
Title: Chapter 5 01 Sep 2015 7:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you
Title: Chapter 5 11 Aug 2015 3:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Probably too late but I vote for them to stay married I like just Severus and Harry!

    Author's Response: It's not too late, but I'm planning for the Malfoys to stay together and Snape and Harry to do their thing.
Title: Chapter 5 04 Aug 2015 2:54 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Oww!!!

    Que impresionante capítulo, (bueno este y el anterior)

    me encanta como vas dibujando la historia del embarazo de Severus,

    estoy de acuerdo con Harry, fue cruel de Lucius pedirle a Severus ser el padrino de su bebé,

    y no esperaba que el supiese que iba a tener un niño con su ex amante, pero genial

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this chapter and the previous one, and hope you keep enjoying it. I'm going to try to keep a good balance between Harry & Severus' interactions and Severus' memories of his pregnancy, so there will be a few more parts involving that, and if you think it's cruel for Lucius to name Severus godfather to Draco (which it is), what he does in one of the upcoming chapters, after Draco is born, will be a bit more audacious than that.
Title: Chapter 5 04 Aug 2015 2:40 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good chapter, can't wait for updates.... Maybe more harry interactions?

    Author's Response: There's going to be more Harry interactions in the next chapter. I'm trying to keep a balance between Severus' memories and his interactions with Harry.
Title: Chapter 5 03 Aug 2015 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter!! So did Sev take what the Malfoys gave or did he tell them to bugger off?

    Author's Response: That will be discussed in the next chapter :)
Title: Chapter 5 03 Aug 2015 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'd prefer the Malfoys stay married.
    Probably - even without love at first, they might developed devotion to each other.

    Definitely I'd prefer Lucius and Severus relationship to stay in the past - it will be easier for Harry to bear..

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) Whether or not the Malfoys are still devoted to each other, I don't think that Lucius and Severus will be together in this story. Despite the fact that I like the pairing, I don't think that it would work with how I'm writing Snape in this. Lucius walked out on him once, I don't think Snape's the type to take someone back after he'd been left like that.
Title: Chapter 5 03 Aug 2015 1:20 pm
Reviewer: YnxNyx (Signed) [Report This]
    I say keep the Malfoys together. Not only because it's rarely done, but also because it's been almost 16 years. Severus at least sounds as if he's gotten over Lucius. And considering the canon point you set this at Lucius would be in Azkaban, devoted to Voldemort. If Severus was so determined to raise the child alone, get Harry away from Dumbledore and out of the war, I don't think he'd let Lucius be involved in Harry's life.

    Author's Response: That is a good point. Severus, once Lucius had proved that he was too afraid of what would happen (ie. being disowned) if he stood up to his father about their relationship, had started to realize that, with or without Harry, Lucius would never admit that they had been together. They may still be friends, of a sort, but I'm quite possibly not going to put Severus and Lucius back together. It would be too flawed, really, among other things.
Title: Chapter 5 03 Aug 2015 1:09 pm
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Get sev an malfoy together but let harry make it hard to get close to and draco an harry fight as always

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