| Title: Chapter 8
| 09 Aug 2015 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: WAHA (Anonymous)
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Hi,
I just read your story in one go and I really like it. I like the fact that the relationship take time to place. Besides, I would rather like if Snape and Lucius stay apart. It just don't seems like Snape to forgive someone who did that to him or Lucius to suddenly cares about a child he didn't want. Just one question, how long do you think this story will last.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the story! I'm not currently planning for Severus and Lucius to get back together, for the same reason that you named. Severus would never forgive someone who betrayed him like that. If you are asking how often it will be updated, I'm trying to update as often as I can, and will hopefully have a new chapter on the 10th or 11th. If you're asking how long it will last entirely, I'm still uncertain about that. They'll definitely get to the bottom of what Dumbledore did before the story's over. Beyond that, it will end when I reach a good endpoint.
The emotion in this chapter was refreshing.... Still can't can it for the next update!
I am really enjoying reading your story. I am sure that there will be rough times but they both need each other.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks for the review :) There's going to be rough patches once they're a little more comfortable with each other, but they do need each other.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 07 Aug 2015 4:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fringie7 (Anonymous)
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So will we get to find out what Harry really looks like? Would be nice if he had Malfoy hair and Snape's dark eyes.
Author's Response: In the next chapter, I'm planning for Harry to have a bit of introspection about his new looks, so yes, you'll get to find out what he looks like and, depending on how the chapter goes, maybe how Dumbledore's deception was revealed.
Our poor boys.... Do we get to rake Dumbledore over the coals?
Author's Response: Hopefully, yes. I'm working on a way to make sure he gets his just desserts eventually, but I'm not at that point yet.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 07 Aug 2015 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Nicely written reactions.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review :)
Really enjoying this story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Glad you liked it!
Oh god, what did Dumbledore do?!?
Author's Response: You'll find out in chapter 9, or 10 depending on what happens :)
I feel like a giant crazy scheme is going to pop up and make me hate dumbledore. In any case, still loving the story, and can't wait for updates!
Author's Response: Dumbledore is the one who stole Harry from Severus, so he's already to blame for their separation. I don't know how 'crazy' his reasoning is, but you'll see when we get to that point :)
Good story so far. They are being rather calm about things though. Guess it really hasn't hit them yet.
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